You are definitely a talented writer. I am, however, a bit confused as to your choice of content.. Is this a counter-conscience centered flow or is it really meant to be the 'I leave people dead, I step over them and keep it movin', keep it gangsta'flow? (Know what I mean?)

On another note.Your writing.. I bet you write poetry with little effort and great results.. If you do not write poetry very much, do it more. I almost guarantee you that you will have found yet another love.

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