Voted For: Lay-Text

Imagery: Both of you guys had amazing imagery to me... this was a really close battle... im goign to have to give the imagery to black queen... her piece just pained a picture in my mind more as the story progressed...

Emotion: Once again a close catagory... Queen you had good emotion but it fell off in places while on the other hand Lay's was more put together and his was more felt then yours

Structure: Bother had amazing structure so this is a tie

Creativity: I liked the way that Lay worked his story on the topic and was just more creative with his story... Queen you had a good aproach aswell it just fell short

Vote: Lay Text

No hate to either of you both good talented writers and i would love to battle you guys some time