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Old 10-02-04, 06:19 PM   #7
JackOfAllTradez
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Voted For: AutoMATIK™

Emcee:AutoMATIK

Verse:This Battles Done So Imma Leave This “Kid-in-a-Hearse”
The Little Rich Kids With Touch Screens Are The Only Niggas “Feelin-ya-verse”
Your “Spittin Is Worst” When I Drop I Make Hoes “Run-and-Scream”
You’re My Tag Team Partner, To Prove To RV That Imma “One-Man-Team”
Wana See What The “Ghat Do” I Can Fight,But I’ll Let The “Clapper-Snap-You”
The Only Way U Catch Cases Is When Fans Throw Your Demos “Back-At-You”
I’ll Let The Whole Site Witness Me Break “9th Degree” Spine “In-Three”
If You Hear Niggas Talk About Who The Best Is They Probably “Describin-Me”
When I Blast Im “Killin Shit” … So You’re The Next Victim Off The “Hit List”
The Game Is Over , Im Done Teachin Kid … Class Is “Dismissed” …


Comments:hot...i think that you took this battle with better punches, and more metas....

Marks:
Wordplay:6/10
Vocabulary:5/10
Structure:7/10
Punches:7/10
Personals:6/10
Opener:6/10
Closer:6/10
Metaphors:6/10
Creativity:5/10
Enjoyment:6/10
Overall:60/100
----------60%

Emcee:9th Degree

Verse:I spit sporadic, leave Matik shakin' in a seizure spastic
Situations get drastic then this bast'ids wrapped in plastic
My tactics are give him "manual smacks", I've dabbled in drugs
I work a hand-to-hand, you only work ya when you jack
Damage the wack, won't stand for this crap, know that I'm real
Aut to (ought to) know I'll cut the brakes in ya automobile
You Aut of ya mind battlin' me, you gotta move on
Ya rhymes more choppy than movements of automatrons (robots)
Wit ya 20/20 vision shulda seen me comin', damn (sig)
The 9th Degree burns just made this Automatik jam


Comments:well i think that you lost this one because lack of metas and word play AND vocab...well you both sorta lacked on vocab but anyway...

Marks:
Wordplay:4/10
Vocabulary:5/10
Structure:5/10
Punches:4/10
Personals:4/10
Opener:5/10
Closer:5/10
Metaphors:3/10
Creativity:4/10
Enjoyment:2/10
Overall:41/100
----------41%

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