Originally Posted by Jacko
Ya over dude..in fact, you're depressing..a downer bitch
Especially since Empire realized that his skill was counterfeit
->>good opener here
Pound ya fists, ur cocky, but ur lines are the poorest..
& ya couldnt catch a buzz..surrounded by forests
->>no...
Get flossed ya geek..u weak & Jackos pardons...
But it'll be real nice if Empire leaves, like fed Gardens!
->>what does the first line mean? punch in second line didnt connect
hit with a flurry…. from behind, watch your head crack
twist you’re frail little body around, so you can talk back
->>ehh its a decent punch
Forever branded… you can’t change the past, stop tryin
I mean really… you switched to dial up just to keep lyin
->>I dont understand this...did you have beef in the past or what? shouldve been explained better
->>ehh its a decent verse...youve got some skill i see from the first bar but the rest was mediocre
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