Voted For: _LM_

L-ame M-uthafucka L-acks M-ind
But wants to come @ mine
First you need to elevate your rhymes
(eh)
This is my work & all I’m about
Do I come to you job and get loud
Smacking dicks out your mouth
(eh...k just as generic as the 1st set)
NO cur I understand thats ur domain
But u wanted me to drop on ur ass like rain
Ur rhymes just go in circles no wonder they pointless
U Shit ur pants @ the site of a flow’s verse and gets stress
(eh...same as above man...spice it up a lil with some metas and wordplay my man)
I came on the site and After I drop my verse
All he was felling was mega hertz
(k....there we go a lil progress)
Saw that I won this Cur I aint no half ass new comer___
Your last opponents gave you an inch and now u think u're a ruler__Na!!
(delivery sucked here...but ok attempt)





I Awesome With Raps...Enlighten Dude's I'm A Vet..
You Would Think I Get Negative Feed..
..The Way I'm Awe Full With The Text...
(braggo ish, but nice wordplay)
Took A Break Since I Started Writing At Six..
As The Pen Drops..This Damn Ock..
..Will Read This Like "I Shoulda Started Riding His Dick.."
(lol ok)
Bombing The Real...This Fag Outta Be Killed..
He Wack..I'm Like A Patient In Chemo..
..Obviouslly Ill..
(braggo ish....coo play to)
Dude You Can Hate..But You'll Lose To The Greats..
Potential, Rhymes Could Be Dope...
..If you Should Em With Base..
(nice ...coo wordplay)
This Bitch Is A Herb Flippin Nerds..Do Your Best
.. But Your Verse Couldn't Flow Right...
Shifted The Words To The Left...
(k)
Your Next Best, Bitch? Nah You Aint Rattle Tec's Kid..
You Aint Carry Guns..
..But I Run Up With 6-9's Like Ya Record...
(coo personal)
Never Hot Watch What I Do To You This Fucker Bitchin...
Go Platinum?..
Dawg You Couldn't Go Aluminum In My Mother's Kitchen..
(lmao damn)
Notepads Ignition..Easy To See I Key Every Verse..
Man He Better Learn..
It's Obvious..Like Daisies To Weed..We All Seen Better Herbs..
(whooo)
So You More Wack Than The Wackest Men.
Get Attacked Again But Fuck Slaughtering Verse..
..I'll Leave That To Jin..
(oooooo nice ender)


v- LM.....harder personals...had direction....wordplay...punches....solid verse
verse was very generic......didnt seem too cocky or had the killer instinct....keep elevatin homie...learn from this battle