dope shit.. kind of like u feeling alone or betrayed... i used to be good at these types of raps.. not so much anymore.. kinda faded out of it.. well it was a good story to read.. kept me hooked. nice word play... in some parts it was a lot like slims shit in one of his songs... dont rememeber which one tho.. but good shit i liked it..some good rhymes others basic... i know u can do better then that.. ive seen it..but guess u wasnt feeling it.. no doubt tho pretty good shit... keep comin...

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