Hey Gyyyrl.
This piece was madd nyce. Really felt the emotion just floatin up off the page as i was reading it. I especially was feelin the last couple'alines:

>"so this is my letter to you dad I'm fleeting
and still I stand, it takes a boy to be a daddy
and a father to be a man.... I Hate You"

Really summed up the message of the whole piece. Very dramatic and powerful. Feelin this. Keep that shit up girl.
Peace n propz.