Ok, like I said to you on AIM. This piece was so so so so so deep and complex. I loved that part of it. Your vocabulary was astonoshing. Your emotion was very deep and goes straight to the mind.

The complexity alone in this piece perplexed for a good 5 minutes until I figured out what it all meant. I had a mental picture going, a bit distorted from the complexity but I still really enjoyed what I was reading.

Your structure is that of what I do. So it was REALLY easy for me to read this piece. The flow was so-so but then again, so is mine, so once again, I was very pleased with that.

This is a solid piece, and a good read. Everything here except for the flow was about a 10/10.

This is a great piece and gets my nomination.

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