CUT:
you don't even gotta check in, we all kno u'r verse is crap
my hands could be covered in pnb but your still the worst snap!!*
^....ok punch/personal...flowed ok...decent line...6/10
a purse snatcher, that's the only way you get money
text is crummy, less then funny, flows like i intend it's sunny
^....didnt get it quite..not too good here....4/10
fifteen lines? i could beat you in two-let's not get carried away...
have ya lookin down like that dude in your sig u betta call it a day*
^.....ok punch/personal again not too shabby...6/10
tryin to knock me out, give me a keg and a couple qualudes
see your a newbie, so take this truthfully, you'll .snap. and break loose!!
^.....decent set up nice u could have connected it much better 5/10
nigga i payed my dues, you just wishin u been noticed...
fixin the votings-i'll get all up in your grill-like my dicks in a foreman
^.....ehh....filler kinda attempted punch.personal....lacked i thoguht 5/10
so just sit and listen, my shit dismisses to clock clowns
you so full of it, make like the quick forum box and drop down!!*
^......ok closer...nothin special......ok punch....self glorfication is no good(1st line a little)6/10
overall: not a bad verse....punches could be better struct was good....wordplay decent....flowed ok...disses/personals...were ehh....overll u got 32/60
snap:
Each time ya battle me, ya life's a little bit shorter/
Beatin you is like puttin M&M's in alphabetical order/
^ cant be done? cuz thats what that says to me...bad line 3/10
This newb couldnt fool-me wit a muthafuckin uzie/
Sprayin shit like grass feeder leavin himself in a doozie/
^....not good punch...nice multies....filler tho 4/10
Poor cutastraphe, im spittin a masterpiece, of disaster so-please/
get on ya knees, an' realise i got the keys to your fuckin release/
^...fake personal....self glorfication...not too good a punch nice multi ues tho 5/10
Your spits~are~hopeless, theses lips strip~your~focus, leaving your body decaying in pits~of~locus/
The closest, you've come ta ferocious doses of rap potions was when ya hocus pocus'd yaself in atrocious lotions/
^...stretched lines...good multies tho...they were sick here...ok punch...6/10
I bet the record companies hated your style, all it did was bore 'em/
Now you've realised you true dream is to own an internet forum/
^ better punch....good job there....7/10
Dude, Your Forever 'doomed to text', you'll never -rap on wax-/
And I'm leavin' this cat like Dale Earnhardt, -dead on tracks-!!/
^ another good punch/meta....nice u got better here...7/10 loose the hyphens and shit tho
Techinically and tactically proficient when spittin'...illicitly written provisions, testin' this is forbidden/
So sit back and listen as i destroy ya by verbal division..dismissing you for the simple fact that ya aint any competition!!/
^...stretched again....
good clsoer all in all...nice multies again....6/10
overall: you got better toward the end w/ ur punches...work on them....shorten some of your bars...find a way to fit those multies in tho they are sick....40 - 70
overall i vote cutastraphe.....he had 32 out of 60 ...snap had 40 out of 70....those extra two points give CUT the win.....good battle tho....snap u have the idea u'll elevate...but cut's verse was just better here...
vote - cut