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Old 09-09-10, 12:17 PM   #6
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i think colas set up was aright, played but it's a set up so who cares eh. The actual punch. Leaving someone out of place doesnt sound hard to me either. Then again neither does, your raps belong in the trash. I mean the wordplay is fresh (to me) although seems like it's obviously been done so many times. And the whole "your raps belong in the trash" is played but then again almost any insult is played so it's hard to come off that fresh

I dont know man, I thought ichaboys was just more classic wordplay text diss style, slightly better executed

really close, I woulda liked to have called this a tie

U guys need to up the complexity of your wordplay. Cola you need to make your set ups more relevent to your punches.

But I suck at text these days and there's no reason for me not too on this site either so don't take my advice too hard, or at all, I dont really give a fuck
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