yo nice peice man. you're actually starting to become one of my favorite artists to read in the OM section. Your imagery once again is what sets you apart from many of the others on this site. ive never seen a person bring a vision to life the way you do in a long time. not only does it bring the story to life visually, you can almost hear the narration as the images run across your mind

Turning onto a graveled road littered with these forgotten memories,
Wondering for a fraction of a second if my footprints remember me

probably the best line ive read in the last couple weeks. good drop man and keep em comin
8.5/10

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