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Old 06-07-07, 05:20 PM   #39
Hard-Cor
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That verse wasn't to bad.... i aint goin to lie
only cuz im comparin it to poetry from when i was 5
see man im tired of you, you're all played out
i would like to see you quit and be all faded out
really man, your shit sounds all the same to me
you know, it was in a dream when it came to me
your shit just like every other wack rapper tryin to flow
the worst part is after you see this you'll be buyin some mo
dude! stop paying ya ghostwritere... he aint that good
and stop posting, dogg you know you could
cuz im seriously tired of dissing the same wack emcee's
to make your verse good i got ya girl wackin me
so I aint so bored while reading that dirt
you didn't read mine befor you droped, that hurts
i can tell by the shit you dropped it was a flase verse
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