This beat is incredible yo. Your flo was good. My rhymes outshine your necklace sounded a little weird but i think that's just your flo.

Second verse the flo seemed off in multiple places but once again i'm not sure cause your style is really weird. Seemed like you needed a little more at the end of the second verse then and that's why i'm sayin...maybe a delay on "why im sayin" so it echoes or something like "and that's why i'm sayin to these punks...if you hear me, etc".

The chorus is awesome but the "if you hear me turn it up sounds TOO plain against the effect of the rest of the chorus. I have no advice for this i really just wanna see what you do cause i know it's gonna be hot.

Also this song is awesome. If you put somebody else on it, it better be me I been waiting to feature on a song with my new equipment.


P.S. Send me a link to your cd so i can "cop that disc" yo.

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