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Old 08-11-06, 03:51 PM   #16
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Well this was a good battle...

Sus, your verse was aiight, nothing really jumped out at me. But nothing against your topical skill i just felt bored by the way you wrote the topic.. basic to me. Decent attempt at wordplay which i dont advise in a topical but if dont right make it dope. Use more imagery next time.

Mentalz... First of all good vocab, read a dictionary before this battle huh ? You had good imagery as well. The piece was written well and the pictures were vivid. Good Piece


Suspicious: 6.5/10

Mentalz: 7.8/10


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