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Old 08-21-03, 10:39 PM   #10
SiCkSiCkLy
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honestly, this battle was weak.........i think funda-mentalz got it....and so that there is no confusion or accusation...imma explain it......

Aight yo, battle me? Dawg you must be on "crack"/
"Drugs" Bunny called, he wants his 24 carrots back!

this was decent......could have been worded better, which would have made it a better bar....but decent personal...

Your name is 24 karat, and you still dont rap "golden"/
Your gettin lyrically "flushed", I'm callin' your "bluff" and you're foldin!

first line was decent....second line sucked......should have worded this better too....

24 karat?? WOW that's almost as thick as your head/
Change your name to "Flatline" 'cause you're fuckin dead...

this line was wack as fuck........period....

I can see why you rep that crew....'cause your a fuckin joke/(check his sig)
You get "takin out" by my "deck" because we're playin CHOKE/(card game)

decent first line.......but for the second line..i never heard of choke...lmao

ANNND It's Over

You made the deadline friday NIGHT because you needed to think it through your mind to avoid a PRE-WRITE/
Im higher then you in this rap game, because your just the "joker" but I am a "knight"...

decent closer.....once again could have been worded better....

overall, ya verse was pretty wack.....no multis....punches were minimal.......you get 4/10........

now for karat.........

Your rhymes blow harder then prositutes in a alley//
Im endin this battle faster then the Waynes Bros finale// (they didnt have a finale)

this was wack.......honestly......

You dont have any skillz... I'll kick yo ass like Chris Farely did in Beverly Hillz//
I have u undaground eating worms and mud like rugrats Lil and Phil//

this was wack also....another weak attempt at a punch.....

Your rhymes cant fuck wit me... Im killin this fruity bitch like he was hangin from a "BredFruit" Tree//
I'll leave your body washed up along shore of the Carribean Sea//

another wack attempt at a punch......come on kid......

Afta this battle we're gonna end up on Judge Judy.. you'll ask her for an Insanity Plea// ((criminal law) a plea in which the defendant claims innocence due to mental incompetence at the time)
My rhymes will slam u harder then Wrestlers on WWE..from the highest degree..to the lowest degree//

another weak punch attempt......why would you go on judge judy?.....and what do degrees have to do with getting slammed??....

Tha battle over.. run like u seen three terminators//
Im squashing this herb.. like i was a weed exterminator//

this was the only decent bar you had in the whole battle.......

overall, your verse was wack....you had alot of punch ATTEMPTS...but no good punches at all.......3/10.....

vote=Funda-Mentalz...

any problems with this vote......fuck off...lmao....P C Z
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