Originally Posted by JP Morgan

good choice on the beat. actually aint sing bad in hold you down. exept the song is about bein a player, not lovin a bitch haha. hear you last verse, flow was good at the biggining, maybe fall off a little bit, and could of gone more lines while it fades out, u end a little abrubt.
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boss. first dude has two dope lines, dont free style cuz i write good, and another, you came hot second too, but sometimes when you switch your flow u get off beat a little and then get back on though, shits still worth listenin to, pretty good shit. i'm mark schafer, imma add u up on myspace