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Old 06-17-05, 11:16 AM   #18
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one of the best battles ive seen on rv, props

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Wanted this postponed?, the kid's shook, doubt ya show soon
Cuz when I say that you Jet-Son... I aint calling you cartoons
^^nice opener, good wordplay
Listen for the truth, faggot, and just watch how I expose you
Cuz if ya GW, it's no wonder your verses always get a "boooh!"
^^simple, wasnt feelin it
Kids was 'all-aboard' when ya made the 'ship', i'll smack your lip
Rocking the boat, I hit "9-D" and... sunk his whole 'battle-'ship
^^nice nameplay, very original, connected well
Feel that bitch? you know you could never come with some wit
But peeps say your verses are 'stable'... hay... n' utter bullshit
^^lol, i love this bar....rofl
Little faggot, I don't even think a migit could come up shorter
I'm droppin this 9... like the gunshop just canceled the order
^^nice nameplay, well worded
You’re my apprentice kid, will he win KORV 2? Ha!!! Hell nope!
When this bitch 'un-leashes' her rhymes, we never collar dope
^^nice concept, bitch/9th...hmm...releventcy lacked but still koo
Hurting you lyrically, this is a blow-out, fuck down to the wire
I got Degree kept in torchair(torcher) like I lit his seat on fire
^^couldve been worded a tad better
Play boardgames with his brain, leave him 'scrabled' and shook
Then cut his body into chess/chest pieces to show he's a 'rook'
^^nice concept n wordplay
Firing shots off at your crew yo, got bitches hiding in the trench
Fuck ghost writers, man, i'll kill 9... and Degree will be the tenth
^^ok, but not hard hitting
9 is obedient to his master, and he's learned well under my wing
So this clown'll make a grandg-gesture(jester) when I'm the king
(it's not self glory, think 'bout it)
^^hm, was.nt bad, original but not hard hitting
closer shouldve been better n is supposed to be the best
or most solid bar in your verse, or close to it.. this 1 lacked

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overall, alot of your verse was nice n fresh with good
wordplay n nice concept, personals were there n you
connected with a tonne of bars.......nice verse


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Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff
I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff
^^honestly, i disliked this bar
He wont reign, I'm stormin' upon his horizon of thoughts
And take this cats 9 lives without needing some time to paws
^^forced ryhme schem, but the wording wasflawless
What's the cause? Well you got cocky and thought you had Degree
Plan was all mapped out, so I'll compiss on your strategy
^^^omg, damn that was nice
I'm savage, g, I almost gay bashed and had your faggot ass kicked
But you never came out the closet...you just stayed in there to jacket
^^lol,.decent stuff 9th, bit stretched but still koo
How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is
I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness
^^well used, even thou pature is gettin kinda played now
You can't hack it, skill level is way below perfection
So I'm bout to axe you, and I'm not a black kid with a question
^^nah, lol,.. just wrong 9th.....decent but wrong..lol
Suggested a battle before but you said "No P, later"
I expected the duck, even your alias is the e-vader
^^nice, short n sweet
Plus your main account suggests biting, so now I'm actin' bitter
I'm so flat out tired of you I'm about to Jack The Ripper
^^nah, wasnt feelin this to much
Had enough, friend? That's how it might look
But you revved my engine, so InturnI'll comebustchins with a right hook
^^punch was pushed n setup needed work..
This battle's a waste of my time, so instead of crackin' your clock
I killed you online, now have the admins put Jack in a box
^^ok, but setup n punch held no releventcy to eachother that i could see
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overall 9th you had some real dope concepts that were well worded n in my eyes near flawless. yet a couple that were boarderline wack to me....
damn close battle, but imma go with jack just for a more solid hard hitting verse overall, n having original concepts..

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vote/jack
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!