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Old 06-11-05, 05:12 PM   #10
Logic The Goonie
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From: So. Killa Kali
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Wanted this postponed?, the kid's shook, doubt ya show soon
Cuz when I say that you Jet-Son... I aint calling you cartoons
Feel that bitch? you know you could never come with some wit
But peeps say your verses are 'stable'... hay... n' utter bullshit
You’re my apprentice kid, will he win KORV 2? Ha!!! Hell nope!
When this bitch 'un-leashes' her rhymes, we never collar dope
Firing shots off at your crew yo, got bitches hiding in the trench
Fuck ghost writers, man, i'll kill 9... and Degree will be the tenth

A lot of your verse was dope, but WTF @ explaining etc? That was homo, the chess piece line would've been better with no "/" so it seemed forced as fuck, along with that torcher line. And stop with all this structure, i could tell you added extra words here and there to make it look better, fuck structure, its a battle.

vs.

Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff
I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff
What's the cause? Well you got cocky and thought you had Degree
Plan was all mapped out, so I'll compiss on your strategy
How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is
I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness
Suggested a battle before but you said "No P, later"
I expected the duck, even your alias is the e-vader
Had enough, friend? That's how it might look
But you revved my engine, so Inturn I'll comebustchins with a right hook

eek fool. I'm mad at you for the axe line. And I used a pasture line before but i'll let it slide since you used it 40636036 times better than I did. The comebustchins could have been worded better but it was good. Compiss line was dope.

Y'all made it close, should be close, but I got 9th takin it.

v - 9th Degree
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