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Old 03-07-07, 05:28 PM   #8
- Troublesome -
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The Hulk:
Ppl. know me.. I really dont need introductions
but i got a gut feelin bout u.. following my appetite for destruction

nice

tryna man handle the hulk.. my one punch'll make logan drop
U couldnt even fuck with bruce BANNER,unless it was adobe photoshop

nah, forced wordplay, wasn't worded well either

an we know wolfy aint got the brains.. so ill display the truth
how u gonna claw ur way threw ME.. an cant even stop sabertooth?

ok

Ill beat wolfy to a bloody pulp... an have'em left dead
but if logan attacks..
...ill take cover n use it 4 his deathbed

ok

im incredible when displaying my talents.. so its official,man
im mean green..while this fags dressed up like disco dan

ehh

Overall...nothing spectacular. Opener was your best, some cool lines, some I wasn't feeling.


Baron:
When you turn all green and angry, that's some scary shit ..
But I find Bruce Almighty more laughable than I did THAT Jim Carrey flick!

ok

Imma hustler. I smoke big green AND my shit is the dopest ..
Plus I carried metal in each hand loooooooong before DaTrus had given me Logan!

ehh

This shit isnt over, bitch. I maim kills, with you its the same drill.
How the FUCK are gonna be like twice my height, but have half the brain cells?!

decent

I smash bitches nightly. But this jokers a fraud ..
Always talking bout how Hulk Smash. But you've NEVER gotten close to a broad!

roflz, line of the battle

At least I own a fucking costume, faggot. Your looks HORRID ..
When Bruce Banner gets mad, he turns into the Hulk. When the Hulk gets mad, he turns into Chuck Norris!

ok

Consistency wise it was pretty much the same as Hulk's verse. But the Hulk Smash line killed it.

Both verses were on and off, pretty close other than the Hulk Smash line. That line took this for Baron, shit was nice. I don't really see how Hulk's was more complex or witty...his opener was nice, but other than that the verse was pretty average. Baron's was average too, but the smash line put him over the top. The cover line by Hulk was cool...but it could be done in any regular text battle vs. anybody, it didn't specificly relate to the whole concept of this, get creative with it.

vote = Baron
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