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Old 08-10-08, 06:05 PM   #10
JTR
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3.. 4.. 5. watch as I defeat this guy
& I’m not counting, I’m deciding on how many votes I shud beat u by
dope +1
ur 2 champ matches sucked. where’d u get ur rep from?
kirk owned u twice with such ease, even shatner’s lookin to get some
wack and played
I wreck dudes son, straight clown ‘n’ defeat ‘em
& voters won’t give ur lines a seconds thought when it takes HOURS to read ‘em
this was ok
ur stretched shit is garbage. I’ll win this in but a moment
coz L F ain’t shit but an S away from ACTUALLY being a worthy opponent
lol aightt +2
that’s right faggot. & I know that males be givin u moon eyes
so no wonder chicks consider Lay dull – he’s known to only spoon guys
nah i aint feeling this boring
plus, ur mom is a whore. and ur birth’s been quite the saga
men Slytherin her so much, even Voldermort cud be ur father
wtf does slytherin a girl mean, lol nice invented word
I know u love my style. but still I’m trashin you, look
how u gone fuel ur verse when u spent half the mag gassin’ me up
yea this is played my flip was fresher
seen u in VTL and RBL, and bro ur frontins wrong man
u ain’t never droppin the words o’ god, coz then u’d lose ur #1 fan
lol +3
^ speakin of. you won last week in the RBL, but I still outclass ur fire
coz I lost, matter o’ fact I got KO’ed – and I’m STILL fuckin ranked higher
this is rv, we dont care bout u and him in other leagues
& lay thinks he knows me, thinks I’m disguised poorly
i’m thinkin he might attempt a solo play – and he’s callin it his life story
lol ill, +4

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fuck you dare say?..bitch you'll be the one to leave weathered.
you Used to be good..cuz dog we all jus Use you to seem better
simple man
only fags have to warm up, n its that note you'll be falling on.
so next time disguise ya streches,..an not with that smaller font.
nah didnt like this
verse was jus strenuous braggin in fact now this venue is laggin.
I don't need votes to beat you By'.. you already ARE a genuine faggot.
played lol, and bad wording
your couple's poor as fuck, and only deserving of a sitting ovation
ya girls on the Underbelly of society.. where everyones dick is located.
coulda worded this better
I'm back to harm ya..Lay here's so try an outlast the carnage.
he's an Army...an its drafting requirements must be 'be whack or garbage.'
lol that was decent +1
you can't contest with Lay, without technique to be constructive with.
an with one hook we'll see this Kidnap so long you'll think I abducted him.
nah this is played out man
you an Nick are close..an as for ya style Lay will end it surely.
he musta taught ya alot..from that flawed structure to ya pathetic wording.
lmao @ dissing two guys at once +2
see ya styles obsessive, nothing impressive it'll never get any praise.
an ya never struck me as a bitch..most of ya punches missed anyways.
ILL +3
pullin chicks?..na your jus acne to me, I'll shoot ya so give it a rest doc.
cuz this Pimp'll spend most of time gettin bigger just to get popped
nah this was playeedd
sure Nick..you an Laz are tight its only now that I've began beleivin it.
in fact the only Shocker .. is the hand technique ya use to please em with.
gay

this was 3-4 quotables, yo lay you should just came a lil harder, i thought youandwhatarmy's verse was pretty weak for the amount of lines he dropped, but you came pretty played and ur lines that werent didnt hit cuz they were worded bad, ive seen u do better then this

v/youandwhatarmy
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