very very simplistic boring read, I mean...you did grab me for about 6 lines before I lost complete interest in the whole entire piece but from what I read, you could definitely expand your vocabulary which would help when making OM's that touch on deep issues such as domestic abuse, but when you hear about it over and over, it's just...best that you try to be more creative, cuz you got to put yourself in the critics shoes. This person is seeing topics like this by the dozens.

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