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Old 02-01-04, 01:51 AM   #6
Lethargic
Middle Weight
 
Posts: 828
From: Campbellsville
IP:

Sureal ya been here for years... and ya still aint ill duke,
most people like to kill time...but seems time is killin you...

heh, not bad

look noone feels ya buddy... n' the topicals won't cut it,
1 noun n Verb'll be the rusty knife twistin in ya stomach...

Not feelin it

Verb'll is Av n' sucks ass... not even better than worst,
Even me dissin myself... is two steps ahead of ya verse...

Again, not bad

Verb's unfuckwitable... and it's said by every dope head
n' compared this eunich is 'unfuckwitable'...........in bed...

Heheh, amusing.

Huh.. Verbal Kent Comes Out , Busting Men & Tryna Deposit..
By The Way Did I Mention... He Was Coming Out Of The Closet..

Eh...

Av, Loves To Play With His Woman, He Stares At Her Tight Ass..
But Av... Times Up... Recess is Over.. Get Her Back To Class..

Kinda Funny

This Cat's More Pussy Whipped , Than Dominatrix Kittens..
Missed The Litter Box, Shit On My Text, N' Still Kills Your Writtens..

Odd is it may seem...I've seen a punch with the exact same concept before. Just worded slightly different.

Kent's Guna Take Wits End To The Top, Do Text And Get Paid..
..Yea...That Has As Much Chance. . . . . As Slik Gettin' Laid..

Lol, I found that amusing.

Overall: Even though it was a no show verse, I think Av still pulled this off. Sureal, it was blatently obvious you didn't come as hard as you could have. Possibly due to Av dropping a no show verse under the idea that you weren't going to appear. HOwever, next time, at least make sure the verse is good enough to guarantee you the win.

Vote ~ Ava