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Old 01-31-05, 11:15 AM   #7
Wickedclown
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Voted For: .Wicked One.

aight this was an aight battle... nothing spectacular but here is my break down:

Wicked- ya shit was pretty good, straight opener... structure needs a little work, some of it was stretched... flow wasnt hurt to bad by this, it was aight... punches hit well and personals i thought were pretty dope, especialy your second bar about his crew, i liked that... vocab was actualy pretty good as was creativity and metas... overall not a bad verse... 7/10

IE- ya shit was also aight... just like his your structure needs work... flow was aight but could have been better seeing as how some of ya lines were pretty stretched... punches were good, i really liked the jenna jameson line... personals were hit and miss... vocab was aight as were mettas... overall 6/10

no hate at all to IE you did your thing and i respect that, i was just feeling Wickeds verse a little more... both of you need to up on ya structure and that will even out your flow.. good battle by both of you....

VOTE- WICKEDONE...............