Well, I was really felin this battle

DQ...ya piece was nice. I liked the emotion and the genuine feeling of dislike.

I knew she was quite miserable, maybe even grown suicidal
As her whole life fell apart just like her home's blue vinyl

^^ Feelin this, great imagery.

But as far as the topic is concerned, it was a lil off. I understand where u were going, and what you were trying to convey, but it took a lil too long for you to get there, and once you got there, I wasn't just totally amazed. Good piece, just didn't seem to mesh well with the topic to me. No Hate.

7/10



Kesse...what can I say??? Ya piece was mad nice. Though yours was much like DQ's in a sense that you described a lot before you hit the topic, when you did, it made me say damn. And that was the biggest difference between your piece and DQ's piece. Imagery was there, vocab was...pretty decent, but ya last four lines is what really wrapped it up for you.

its all around us, but i never truly witnessed its slow demise
some may call is a curse, but me...a blessing in disguise
i lost my vision as a child, but i do not hesitate to embrace
for i feel sight is overrated, the world turned out a disgrace


9/10

v/Kesse