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Old 09-02-06, 01:12 PM   #8
Dickard.
A Life Of Chryme
 
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Wordz Ahgod-Your verse was just okay for me man. I felt the simplicity did not work to your advantage in this drop. Your vocabulary was so basic it did not apply to your emotion or verse at all. It had more of a quick text flow then a slow paced topical piece which was sort of bad because it lacked the nessacary imagery you need. Overall it was an okay drop You got your simple point across but the problem is you never elevated from the simple level ill give you a 5/10

Lampejo-This piece was pretty good, I enjoyed the read The emotion was good in your piece...You had a good topical flow unlike your opponent..Your imagery was more appreciatable. This in my eyes was a one sided battle. You had good meaningfull thoughts in your verse which not only let me read but think about what you were saying which made the read much more enjoyable..overall id give you 8/10

v/ Lampejo.
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