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Hi Dutch,
You had some good emotion in the piece that you dropped, but you need to focus on choosing better words to describe the drops in the future. This was a very rudamentery type of writting that did not involve much complexity within it...
However, it was still an okay-type of drop... Keep dropping them....
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LPMNDCTE
The B.E.S.T. Crew
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