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Old 07-27-08, 04:32 PM   #10
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*sigh* i didn't even wanna battle this week but at least it'll be short,
battlin this fag, i'll call him parquet cuz the ball's in his court,
stupid wording, ruined the punch
you're the perfect examplae of the bigger they come, the harder the fall,
the last time you drop'd decent was vs Flight, cuz it's the last drop you have at all!
getting personal, although could've been better
Bitch I'm steppin over you and heading straight to the goal,
Hurtin ya feelings ,go ahead and wipe the shit off your soul,
eh, this was.. well, lets say it.. garbage
The disses is comparative to Earth, fuckin heat to the core,
My sentences make this pussy blister like vaginal sores,
too simple for me
i got a question for you son, there's some knowledge that i seek,
how's you go from a contendor's match to zero points in two weeks?
wording let it down because the concept was cool


VS.


this week just didn’t wanna work, so I decided… screw it
ill just drop something wack…but then this kid beat me to it
OMFG!! PLAYED!!
looki bitch, ill run u da fuck over…cuz ya obviously aint worthy
N yeah im on the verge of re-tyring…I aint gettin my rims dirty
wow, self-glory with tired wordplay.. woah, peep my wordplay
Ya shits abserd b,.…..but thats ok, im known to entice readers
so ill avoid words like ass....unless im describing ur facial features
again, too played
Oh n I read that shit kid...ya rhymes are played out, and boring
prolly thinks RV loves him…cuz we finishing his sentences for him
u've dropped played shit all through so far and then have the nerve to call his shit played.. that in itself rendered this bar not good
dude honestly, u are a challenge, thats' why i cant do this by the book
cuz we all know...the wheelchairs the hardest part of the vegetable to cook
LMFAO!! the only decent bar you had.. but it was a golden one!!


Wow, this is a hard battle to call because both verses were generally weak. They both seemd to be rushed. LFS was elevating weekly, he had to have one off week. Ramcees has dropped some nice shit before, but this was just straight garbage. His entire verse was played to fuck apart from the last bar, which was easily the best bar of the battle. Yeah, I guess I'm a sucker for those corny yet comic lines. Fuck if the other guys didn't appreciate the hilarity, lmao. However, LFS was only let down in most parts by his wording. He showed some ok concepts, had an ok personal and his verse just wasn't as played and that is why I think I have to give the win to him... barely.

Vote: LFS
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