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Abstrakt Your Structure Is Horrible.....Fix Up Your Verse It Looks Like Shit and It Makes Your Verse Horrible To Read. Your Emotion Was Aight....But Your Direction Is So Played...Its Like You Follow The Same Direction In Every Spit You Do. GET SUM CREATIVITY!! Just Use Your Mind To Elevate...You Got Potential.
Babylon Nice Verse...Your Direction Was Also Kinda Played but You Switched It Around and Had Nice Emotion Threwout. Nice Structure and Flow To Your Verse. Just Get Sum Nice Vocabulary and Word Usuage and You'll Be On Your Way.
Vote - Babylon
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