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Old 12-16-03, 12:51 AM   #3
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Yeah i agree this was alright here....structure in this was ok, your lines could have been a little longer i thought, cause they were kinda short though...probably should try to add some multies to this to help it out though...but overall this was ok...keep at it.
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