Both of these were great peices and both had my attension and reeled me in.

Filed: I looked at the stucture and started reading seeing it was easy to read and the flow was great. i'm in the middle on the whole religion thing but yet it was good. Kept on the topic and I did feel the emotion.

on the other hand

Twisted: Your hit me hard and it put me as the person talking you down. The whole peice was flawless and the wordage was top dollar. The emotion was felt but this hit were stuff usually doesn't.

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