im gon start wit the pros before the cons on this one

1st: ur flow was DOPE more better than half these textheads on here
i could tell u did this to a beat u didnt just write some random shit down
so major props to that cuz i was feeling that

2nd: ur rhyme scheme was more complex than average
nuthin that really leaves u shocked but it aint kindegardon
so props on that keep elevatin wit that shit man

3rd: now this wasnt anything saying anything really
parts of it really didnt make much sense really
i mean it did but it was real random and shit
it was like u were putting shit together just cuz it rhymed
so work on that a lil more

other than that not bad better than some of these cats
i'd give a 6.5/10 which aint too bad so keep elevating
and RTF on my "hip hops resting place" holla

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