Mista definately put more effort in his verse and yet, Whyte Ave had good verse to....but in the end, my vote goes to MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ...

MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ: quite predictable approach on the topic, found good balance with your vocab and was also feeling your flow. Structure made it easier to read and the imagery was there to. Emotion was strong but might have tried some more creativity...that's only bad comment I think...

Whyte Ave.: love your approach on the topic, twisted it a little compared to Mista's verse so creativity definately goes to you. Vocab was good, structure decent but your flow was off here and there...Emotion was raw but could've been more complex and indepth but for a quick drop, it's pretty good actually!

DQ

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