this was an amazing piece man...so full of imagery, emotion and clear humanity that it was...superb?
your flow was great, I loved the mass amount of rhyming words in the first verse...very quality.
I don't usually like subtitled pieces, but this came out well...
I liked the use of Ebony and Ivory as their names

great piece man =)

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