.::Aight I'ma Break It Down::.
::.Mike Hawk 6/10.::
Well First Off Your Flow Was Off..It Was Hard To Flow That Topical. Your Imagery Was Basic and Indistinctive. Also Your Vocabulary and Sentence Structure Needs To Be Worked On. You Have Potential Just Elevate With Time.
::.Conclusion 8/10.::
You Had Nice Flow At Points and Then Sometimes You Had The Flow Fallen Off. Your Vocabulary Is Nice, and Your Direction With Imagery Is Decent. Only Thing You Need To Elevate On Is Concistency and Sentence Structure As Well.
Nice Drops From Both.
Winner - Conclusion
~R~