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Vey's a religious man.. well pray to christ to revoke your sins..
cause i dont think God could even Savior chances at the win...
^^not bad wordplay
I'll 1,2 step on your mouth.. So Vey.. just stop the hating..
compare this to a boxing match cause your Out in A Bout And
.................................................. .......................Its not your location
^^worded badly, but nice concept
Vey.. your unheard of.. no one gives a shit when your spitting..
I'd say all of RV should Shed a tear for u.. but the Garage is more fitting..
^^again, nice concept shed/garage, but bad wording
Not Trying to gass myself up. but against me? you wont see this slut win..
Cause Veyetals is soo outta line.. even the geeks will start to cut him..
^^okish
I'm spitting first cause i dont really give a fuck what this dumb fuck will say..
Cause Testing for hepatitis.. is the only time Vey gets a passing grade....
^^okish
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i laugh at your chances of winning, dont even deny it, homie
cause your name wouldnt even be worthy of winning a....(pause)...trophe
^^corny, but kinda nice wordplay
ya shoulda known....my punches rock continents, making you more peru-dent
shape up boy, your drops are soph, more than outta shape students
^^stretched wordplay, but nice idea
so you're bragging 'bout grammar, like sailing for pussy, you never see land
the only contractions i'd ever use you for...lettin my wife break your hand
^^haha, not too bad
you're not above any lines man, try stating shit with relevance
put a cork in your ass...........there, i just fucked your intelligence
^^hehe corny but not bad
and seeing those accomplishments, surprising you were ever selected
cause seriously, who really should i thank for the battle, you or invektive?
^^heh, kinda arrogant, didn't really like it

v/vey - came more consistent

and I am in the league, signed up a few days ago