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Old 05-06-04, 07:21 AM   #24
Terumoto
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Dude, why you dissin others names when your whole rap is a catastrophe/
Youre far from original... with a name like "fresh emcee" youd have-to-be/
i dont get it, you said you had nothing to say but there you are back to rap line three/
you mc away, but little did you know the one that would write back-was-me/
and you done it too, i hate bitches that flow about homosexuals/
next time you write stop and think of what ,I, the best-would-do/
how the fuck do you know the guys gay, thats right.... you dont/
so next time you want to rhyme bout that, thats right... you wont/

yo, bro, lemme give you a tip, you wont grow respect by sayin you rap shit/
you probably think "oh maybe theyll think i can do better"... that aint it/
even someone with slow wits can pick up that you makin excuses for your lame spit/
ohhh... you were bored... hmm.. ok... . anyway, what im trying to say is rapping shit is not somethin to admit/
specially If the standard of your rap is so self explanitory/
WEAK punches, no wordplay... If I didnt know better id think it was an allegory/
But its no problem man... you stick to erupting the scene,-okay?/
I'll Spit fire you stick to dribbling more than kobe from the pro nba/
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