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Old 12-09-05, 04:48 PM   #22
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Voted For: ~Souljah~

~Souljah~ I chose to attack you, some would call it beef
but if you asked ‘any body’ they’ll call it comic relief I’m eager to beef, I’ve never been taught to be cautious
....weak,too much filler.
got ya fakeness exposed like porn stars walkin’ topless
u carry a tune? nah you’ll carry a tomb, listen g’s
..weak punch,and in the 1st line,porn lines are played
you aint ‘sick’ you’ve just got immune deficiencies plus I’ve got time to stop you like freezers full of clocks
...you forced it too much.
then blow your brain circuits to pieces, an leave you full of shock
maybe he likes the taste of chrome? I doubt that
..No rhyme,and weak punch..your trying too hard
so to make his body feel at ‘home’ I dumped him ‘outback’
and if you think about it?, ya skills aint worth being split apart
....ehh,weak.
cuz ~souljah~ ya Rawflowz hard to read in the |||DRKMAN|||
....ok.

You're as sick as what?......don't try feed me these lies
Tryna hide the fact that you "don't make the grade" like a "D"-sguise
...OK.
Me duck???that's like the pot calling the fucking kettle black
Your flow's absurd like a fat chick under the rainbow like "where's my skittles at?"
...Corny
The title of wack stick's to you like metal curves to horse hooves
Wack at everything, you ain't even top of your game at false truths*
...Ok,decent
I could strap a boulder to my leg and drown, you'd still be far below
Your rhymes scheme's a joke at your expense like the bar below
...Liked the 1st line,
Question time: what goes quack, snap and bends over at will
Answer: hoe show breakin his back to duck, through minus skill
....blah,ok

Well,Kinda weak here..
But souljah got it,for having a few decent bars in it.
Fraud,with the except of his last bar..came with bassically nothing..And not to mention,he had a porn star line,which is really played..
So,yea..

Vote-Souljah

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