see.... you're getting a little emotional... it's just feedback... when i give feedback i do it properly.... i know what you're trying to say in the piece....

"you went from talking ab out your drive and how trying to "build new paths" and go straight into shit talking and rhyming just for the sake of it.... it started to make little since as you went on"

^^that was the point i was making^^
that is what i meant by your consistancy and focus.... for someone who doesn't "take it serious" you sure did seem a bit sour that i critiqued your piece.... no worries man, just tryna show kats what my perspective is and how they could make their stuff better... but hey, if you wanna hate me for being real with you then i can't do anything about that... omma do what i do regardless and critique peoples shyt like i always have ... fiar and unbiased.

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