Could it be? ocanti is actually throwin punches, this could be the best battle I've seen from you. not so great opener but great punches, metaphors, and a weird closing but creative and yes I got it. I think there was one played line in there, u got to watch those.
virtuoso your opener was good and then you kind of lost me towards the end, you had a good punch or two but it just did'nt hit as hard. A lot of it did'nyt make sense maybe I'm slow or somethin but watch that and LA CA is Los Angeles, California if I'm not mistaken with what she posted.

But overall, I say ocanti cuz of major elevation in punches and metaphors, structure could be a little better.