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Old 05-08-05, 10:02 PM   #7
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you'll fucking no show, and shit thats in the worst case. .
you can't be on fire, when u miss match in the first place
^^nah, wasnt feeling this at all.........................1/10
guys got a huge ego, but against re~verb the duckings worse..
far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse
^^nope, weak n really had no basis of a punch..........0/10
This guys worse than i thought,Hotshh!, blah, still yet to bust
might be able to convince, but u cant con the rest of us
^^decent.wordplay was original but punch was blah....4/10
this man's wrong monthly, you ain't hard..so save it, shit
cuz you play the bitch on RV.. AND in your relationship
^^ok,.................5/10
watch my metal spray, because your plan's off bluntly
n you'll never coast to the win like living in a landlocked country
^^nah, perdy weak closer.................3/10
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overall, your verses 1st 2 bars were straight ass...
picked up a lil but nothin overly creative in your drop
exception of the con-vince line, your verse was'nt
what i expected, flow was irratic, struc was ok...........8/50
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I never No show to this guys Dismay... so why Delay?
Cuz when the "son" shine thru..... T-storms Die Away
^^ta storm, some may not get it to flow right, koo...6/10
My shit too unique, fuck a name change, kid u a Geek
If u da 'underdog' u getting fucked like a Shitzu in Heat
^^1st line self glorification was weak hotshh,...but punch was nice....6/10
Look ya Verbs need help, Opposition Proceeds as Planned
Cuz the pic under ya name even proves you "Need a Hand"
^^this was nice..............good play of his shit..........7.5/10
Keep dreaming Smartie, forming a crew but ya team is Sorry
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189095
If u owned the rights to ya name u couldnt be the King of RV
^^this was koo, link dont really support ya setup from what i read
but punch was definately koo...............................7.5/10
Look, R e-V erbs get ran thru...... like played Hotshh! rhymes
Your name predicted your future...... T-storms will not Shine
^^already hit this punch once, to repetitive................4/10
About this Tourney, I'm passionate....and you just Acting Bitch
U thought eatn Mac n Cheese on a boat was true Krafts-man-ship
^^liked the worplay, good closer, 8.5/10
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overall hot, you brought some nice personal shit,. liked most of your verse..
creativity was top shelf from what ive seen others drop so far....
wasnt to sure if t-storm dropped a no-show verse but it wasnt on the
same level as your verse..........39.5/60<highest yet, good verse
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!