This battle was closer then any of the other ones i voted on.. All i have to say about this battle is Quality of Quantity..

Soul- very well written... nice and short and to the point. didnt seem to cut off anywhere or be underwritten.. the imagery was great and i loved the emotion that i felt while reading this it was great... your vocab was good but could always be upped..

Mystic... you did good aswell, your imager and emotion was good but they wasnt as complex or as deep as soul's your vocab was good aswell.. only thing i have to say thats bad about your verse is that it was quite predictable after the 3rd line i knew how the verse was going to play out i dunno if it was just me or not but yeah

v. Soul

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