This aint a freestyle lol. I really suggest not sayin its a freestyle when it's clearly not. The quality is horrible you need some producing help and get a new mic. Your swagger is boring, but you have talent. You need to use your voice and when you talk it sounds like you have a bit of a english accent. You should of just mixed into the beats quicker. It's to long for me to keep listenin to how long it is lol. But after awhile man I think you'll sound a lot like 'Kano' maybe. He's probably my favorite uk rapper. Only one I really like actually which isn't very expected. anyway not bad keep elevatin man.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242545

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