yo this is dope.
copy and paste it into open mic if you wont more more people to see it and comment on it.
my advice. cut down a few bar's a couple seemed a little stretched. Flow was nice. Structure's a bit off. It was hard to find the flow while spitting it.. but i actually liked this alot.
take it to the open mic forum and you wil recieve feed on it as long as you give decent feed to other's ish.
I also like the topic's thru out it.
the line's.
I concentrate to write this but I have an itchy nose
this goes out to those I admire most
heavens only daughter God only knows..
versatility like mine keeps tricks on their toes..
I'm in the zone but prone to low-blows..
From the streets to the bedsheets baby anything goes..
I can smell this jealous kat trying to stop my cyber flow..
when i spat this i stoped at spat these line's again because they appealed to me as some dope line's.

take it to open mic...

keep dropping ,stay active.
pz