Mad Dog
He "flooded" this board with money...but he's still "lacking fans",
LP got fluid on the brain...
........................................like drowned kids in "Pakistan",

Alright.. well first off, I agree with Cola on the use of quotation marks. If you're not quoting something, they're useless and look completely gay.

The whole.. "......." punch style doesn't make punches seemed forced if used correctly. It's used for certain styles of punches, in this case it doesn't work. It's best used when you want a pause in your punch that's more effective than a comma.

The whole play on natural disasters.. that shit is really old.. I mean I was doing it 5 years ago..

Quote:

Originally Posted by Red Bull So why the fuck you here? Face it, your hated and you're wack From Flordia Kid? I'll wreck you more than the hurricane attacks

^ Really fucking weak, but it was 05 and well, fuck it, it was 05.

Try coming with something unique next round with some cool wordplay that you've never seen or heard of, once you master a style like that you'll be able to drop bombs.

LPMNDCTE
my gosh your gay and stay on your knees slobbing
When we see Mad Dogg foamin at the mouth. Its not just from a toga party

This was too easy man. It's really just calling somebody gay. I get the wordplay but it's nothing spectacular, it's flow is off and it's rhyme scheme... well it doesn't even exist.

I've seen you do way better than this and I thought you were going to come fire after my advice from last week, but I guess it is what it is.

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