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Old 09-30-03, 04:42 PM   #7
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Sharp Perfection.
 
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From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin
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girl poems are a way to vent emotions and pain or whatever you want to get out, and you sure did get it out in this piece. it was almost blinding. although some of the rhymes turned me off it was a bit much sometimes i found, it was covered up with all the emotion and that helped you pull it off.

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