Voted For: Stanza

was ok even though u only had 30 min. a lot harder to vote than i thought; you're pretty evenly matched.
Stanza:good flow and punches, last one was sorta weaker than the others.
Narc:health and death don't rhyme unless u got a accent. but i can't tell cuz this iz text. bout the same as Stanza with the flow and punches, but i think Stanza's punches were a little harder.

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