SHADOW- very nice drop. good structure and flow but you seem to drift of the topic in some places...

"Me n my crew used to ball, pass notes during study hall"
"Overdue for a call, but half of them in Iraq, the first to fall"

dont really know what this has to do with the topic... that's why i say you went of track a bit...
8/10

HAROLD- also very nice drop. and good structure. but this gets my vote because it seems that you stuck to the story and didn't go of track...
9/10

altho shadow had a better flow i give my vote to THE GREAT HAROLD for the story line... nice work by both

vote- THE GREAT HAROLD

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