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Old 09-06-04, 01:58 PM   #12
Magic5
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Dope.. Period.

Structure was good.. flow was on target..

Rhyme scheme was tight.. nice inner rhyming..

Topic was original.. and u managed to make it work..

Overal.. tight ass peice..

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