yeah......I was feeling this one. Like Phenom was saying, you sound really comfortable on the mic, that's a real big plus. Toward the end of the first verse you sounded to get a little choppy. The second verse didn't match the first flow wise at all. The whole thing was really choppy.....you should have ran the words into each other a little better like you did on the first verse. You got some real good potential from what I hear in this song, just don't get a big head and think you don't need to elevate, cause you could be ten times better

Hit me up if you wanna collab on anything......

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