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Old 12-18-04, 07:06 PM   #7
JPoll
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here we go, let's see how this turns out...

sym (uranium)first


Goodbye

you insecure, even let LK talk crap about ur male family cuz?
face it, this proves enygma'll never be the man his mother was
7 decent, not bad not great...good idea, poor wording
what you've experienced in the past...are all just fake samples
you can even call him EG...cause the kid's full of bad examples
8 haha, that's pretty nice, still the wording is really soft...this coulda been a nasty punch
always lookin in da wrong place, victory...E's never caught her
now enygma's runnin' faster...since da cops are getting smarter
6 blah, the whole cop/prison coulda such a sick punch, this wasn't it though...
you as useless as calculators during English, feel that lil' bitch?
I know u have rights to suck, but your now abusing the privilage
6 you shoulda just set up with a line, then used the concept of the second line as the punch, but with different wording...the second line was dumb...really corny
bitch has even admitted he sucks...time for early christmas meal
& that's "Y" enygma made a callout named "I suck......for real"
6.5 again the first line about the early christmas meal shoulda been the punch with different wording, you should just work on one sick punch instead of two decent punches, your concepts are all really good though
and now you probably think you're useless...but really the fact is
we all really need something only you can distribute: your wackness
7 blah, hmm this wasn't a good concept, blah at best, you have a creative mind a talent, it just wasn't fully shown through this verse.


Enygma:
Symm3trik's too noobish.....this one ain't even close, die
I mean...your names your only hope at making this even on both sides
8 haha, nice play, original, well worded
Uranium? Plutonium?.....I'm playing doctor, so don't start
So when I helium its that I'm at the top of his own charts
9 haha, most people won't get this, haha, molecule charts haha, thats some funny shit
You'll never beat me kid....just let by gones be by gones
Bitch ass moved to asia in hopes that he could Taiwan
10 oh shit, fuck, this is one of the best verses i've read from you...punches are all funny, and their all personals, plays off him...good shit
Got this faggot punch drunk....he's even passing out on me
Can't help if your views are slanted......it's just your nationality
9.5 haha, haha, not played when used like this...wow, well set up, good punch
Have you finish last for doubting me....Pluto's a bitch
I slipped him a Minnie Mickey and he was Goofy as shit
7 humor again and again, good liine, not up to the others but still funny
Won't call him a dick, or a pussy......nope, Pluto's just ass
Only positively charged cause I dipped in his pockets, stole his cash
9 nice closer...although electrons aren't in the molecule, but still no one will really know that...its still funny


clear winner

Enygma
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